Reading this through again, it reminds me a little bit of William Saroyan's writing style only substantial with a truly personal sublime tenderness. An even more so simply evocative tone (vibe).
Be careful with the hook. You might pull your reader's heart right out.
how you make something tragic/fun/romantic at the same time, i do not know. master
I just write life as I see it, which usually is some kind of wonky mix of the three. You know the vibes.
Beautiful. And proof you were always a dreamer.
Lovely. You wordysmith you. :)
Thank you Frank!
I've had this on my saved for some time now. and I'm glad that read it today, because it somehow found me at the right time. Just beautiful!
it was special for me too :)
thank you so much for reading
Reading this through again, it reminds me a little bit of William Saroyan's writing style only substantial with a truly personal sublime tenderness. An even more so simply evocative tone (vibe).
Be careful with the hook. You might pull your reader's heart right out.
John, thank you for your kind words on this cold February morning.
Admittedly I have not read any of Saroyans work but now I’m intrigued. Where do you suggest I start?
I’ve only read The Human Comedy so I can’t speak as to recommendation.
Be well.
Through this essay, your grandmother lives on and inspires us all to be more romantic!
Thank you for your kind words Cole
This is so sad and so funny 😭
that’s what I was going for, thank you dahlia 🥰
Loved it LOVED IT ♥️♥️!!
Hot damn. I cried and laughed reading this.
Then my work is done :)
Thank you Carla
Thank you for sharing 💛
Tender and touching, just the right amount, Sudana.
Thank you Jim, appreciate your kind words
beautiful piece sudana, really did knock some stars out the sky w this one
thanks Griffy, worried it might be a touch too treacly but then again so am I
be treacly!
incredible. i adore
Thank you Mariam ❤️
So beautiful 😍
Thanks Vince
This made me teary eyed, so beautiful
me too! I think that’s alright, given the context :)
This
I think it turned out alright
Yes , good use of what we talked about
My whole body shivered
aw CS (mine too)
crying in the hair salon. I love this.
Yes you went with the hair appt!