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Phisto Sobanii's avatar

Wait.

Sean adopted a cat.

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Gary Trujillo's avatar

Major Kathy Acker vibes, which is to say.... genius.

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Sudana Krasniqi's avatar

garrrry 🥹

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Tis true! The Brooklyn Bard is on fire here!!

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Tara Y's avatar

The biting humor in this poem! Wow

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Sudana Krasniqi's avatar

life is nothing if not absurd and hilarious. thank you for reading Tara.

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Obsidian Blackbird.'s avatar

your so witty and smart

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Sudana Krasniqi's avatar

thank you friend, I try 💕

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Mike Shaughnessy's avatar

exquisite

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Ulysses Santillan's avatar

Well, two individuals trying to connect. And chaos and laughs would be there. Thanks for the read.

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Tor Rose's avatar

Excellent

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C.S. Mee's avatar

If he would have just paid attention this could have gone so well

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Sudana Krasniqi's avatar

well now you said it, who’s paying attention in this economy?

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Caroline Beuley's avatar

I LOVED THIS

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Sudana Krasniqi's avatar

Thank you Caroline, it was so much fun to write. For the record I hate Red Bull (jäger bomb trauma)

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Caroline Beuley's avatar

hahahah i’ll second that — nothing ever goes well after I get into the vodka Red Bulls, but I still can’t help myself sometimes

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Max Murphy's avatar

sublime!

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Sudana Krasniqi's avatar

Thank you Max

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ralph's avatar

drink the milk.

is that the title?

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The last cigarette before bed's avatar

3% cows milk>labaratory synthesized taurine, imho.

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Sudana Krasniqi's avatar

not a big fan of any milk variation, honestly

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The last cigarette before bed's avatar

Fair, milk has an acquired taste that intolerance or preference prevents in some.

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Ditto.

Wonderful post, Sudana!

Well done. You nailed this postmodernism lark to the wall, on multiple levels.

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Ginger Cook (GC)'s avatar

GOD I love this

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